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Pokemon Black Earth C14Chapter 14: The Thunderbadge RebattleA sound like a passing jet rumbled across the streets of Vermillion. with the beating of fierce and powerful wings, on the quay on the far edge of the city landed a Dragonite and its three passengers. They slid off one by one, an older female sliding down its back, followed closely by a younger one. A young male very tenderly clambered across its side and landed hard on his two feet, nearly toppling over. The two girls giggled as they approached him, the younger one speaking, "What's wrong, Kiai? Don't like riding on dragons?"The young man shook off the paleness in his face and replied, "No, and you should have known that from our last chapter."The youngest stared at him, while the older woman gave a giggle, as if understanding his words. After a moment, the youngest shrugged. "Anyway, we should be getting to Surge," she spoke."Very true, Emily," the older spoke. "Now, you remember everything I taught you?"Emily nodded in response. "I remember
LoZ - RC - Chapter 2Chapter 2: Setting OffLink pulled his arm off of Zeldas body. In the night, they had snuggled up close to each other in order to stay warm. Link decided simply to inch away and pretend he hadn't almost grasped his sister's breast. Instead he wrapped his hand around his sword, and held it in the sunlight that was streaming into the cave. "A real sword
" he spoke. "It's really real, isn't it? A real-live protect-the-innocent sword
I'm really a hero now
"Zelda gave a bit of a groan as she slowly awoke. She rubbed the back of her head. "What a weird..." She stopped when she looked around. "Damn it...it wasn't a dream..." She sighed and rubbed her eyes. "Oh well..." She then looked down, noticing something she hadn't before. During the night, the top string to her top had come untied, and upon sitting up, her top had slipped down. She turned red a little, until her eyes went up and noticed Link was staring in her direction. "What are you looking at?!" she shouted and pulled
LoZ - LA - Chapter 1Chapter 1: The Newcomer"Damn it! This is bad!" Link shouted as he gripped onto the mast of the boat. "Where the hell did this storm come from anyway?" Lightning cracked in the sky and Link winced as he tried to pull himself from the mast. The wind blew against his green tunic and he grabbed his green, pointed hat tight onto his brown hair. "Captain! How long do you think we'll be in this storm?"There was no response and Link sighed. He must have been out of hearing range with the sound of the rain, thunder, and crashing of the waves upon the boat. Link stepped off of the mast and pushed himself forward to keep himself steady as the wind tried to blow him away. "Captain!" he shouted, but there was still no response. Link looked up at the helm, but he couldn't see anything through the rain."Captain!" Link shouted once more as he slowly walked his way to the back of the boat and pushed himself against the stairs. He then looked up, and his eyes went wide. There was no one at the helm.
LoZ - TP - Chapter 2Chapter 2: The Twilight!It was the finally the day. Rusl had worked it all out with Mayor Bo. I was going to take Epona and take a special gift to Hyrule. This would be my first time leaving Ordon fully, as I would also be passing the Faron border and into the Eldin and Lanayru Provinces of Hyrule. "Great! You're here and ready!" Mayor Bo spoke as he welcomed me. He was a rather big man to be honest. While he was fairly fat, he was also quite bulky. I heard legends that Mayor Bo had once defeated the Goron Race in a sumo game, but I had my doubts about that."Yeah, I'm ready to head out," I spoke and smiled. Epona was at my side, and her wound had healed a little over the last day or two, but not much."Good, now then, come here a moment." Bo pulled me to the side and I noticed Ilia turned and walked over to Epona. "Be on your best behavior. This is Hyrule you're going to, not some backwater town. You'll most likely be meeting with many of the Hylian knights, and perhaps even the Prin